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thecomixdaddlis posted Dec 17, 2023

new comic

hi i just started posting my comic here, i havent recieved any comments yet, would love some feedback! <3

jrose1 posted Dec 18, 2023

Great job my friend. Look forward to seeing more

ArtCrumbs admin posted Dec 18, 2023

If anyone wants to read it, you can find it here: https://globalcomix.com/c/n-o-v-a-?lang=en

I really enjoy the unique paneling you have, and the colors work great too! I'm all for plants and magic and supernatural elements, so I can't wait to see more, I read and followed it some time ago. Looking forward to more.

Sane posted Dec 25, 2023

You have a unique art style and the paneling is interestingly out of the box, at least for someone like me who's used to a more traditional panel layout.
As for the storytelling, it's too soon to say much with only 11 pages so far, but one thing that I would pay closer attention to in the future, is establishing the location. Especially in a non-contemporary setting it's important to establish where the story is happening. It would have been useful to have a sense of place at the beginning, like are they in a spaceship, a space station or somewhere else.
The last page is a fine example of showing the reader where everything is.