@jrose1

Tough to critique AI stuff, but I can tell you most of the backgrounds and objects look out of place. I does seem to be easy enough to follow and read though

Checked out your comic previously and it's rad as hell man. I honestly don't even have much I can critique so far as it's aesthetic goes. It's possible if something unexpected happens in the first few pages, you might be able to get some readers over the initial hump. I have a tough time if I'm hit with a lot of talking and general exposition from the start. Another thing you might consider is just making it free in its entirety for now. I know it seems counter productive, but I can almost guarantee you'll get more eyes on it.

Regardless, it seems to be a tough thing to break into and it's easy to get discouraged. I worked on mine for 2 years straight once I went on disability, and pretty much just kept it to myself during the entire process. I've been reading stuff off and on for years, but this is my first go at it. You're passionate about it, and I think that's the most important thing. I'm trying to stay on it so long as the motivation to create is there.

I can read it easily on the phone 👍

The vertical format reads really good. I like the characters you drew, but it's kinda jarring when you use the different backgrounds and stuff. My advice would maybe be to practice drawing your own environments. It will most likely seem really tough at first, but they usually can be broken down into simple shapes. If you use photoshop or something similar, you can add a lot of depth to environments and background by setting stuff up on multiple layers.

Some of the talking bubbles seem dense here and there, but I didn't have any problems reading it or following it. I've always thought that making numerous panels of characters talking and responding is kinda annoying, so I'm good with how you did it

Rad as hell my friend. I love that watercolor /paint daub effect with the colors

It's very cool. The comic looks a bit blurry tho

Thanks for this huge amount of research. I have no clue about this stuff, but I feel this will help me wrap my head around it 👍❤️

Great job my friend. Look forward to seeing more

Looks good and reads well 👍👍