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If anyone wants to read it, you can find it here: https://globalcomix.com/c/n-o-v-a-?lang=en
I really enjoy the unique paneling you have, and the colors work great too! I'm all for plants and magic and supernatural elements, so I can't wait to see more, I read and followed it some time ago. Looking forward to more.
You have a unique art style and the paneling is interestingly out of the box, at least for someone like me who's used to a more traditional panel layout.
As for the storytelling, it's too soon to say much with only 11 pages so far, but one thing that I would pay closer attention to in the future, is establishing the location. Especially in a non-contemporary setting it's important to establish where the story is happening. It would have been useful to have a sense of place at the beginning, like are they in a spaceship, a space station or somewhere else.
The last page is a fine example of showing the reader where everything is.