Hey, I would love some feedback!

So #1: If you want feedback, please provide a link. Don't make folks go looking for it:
https://globalcomix.com/c/room-for-four?lang=en

#2: I can see you are drawing digitally. Please add the text in via the text tool. There were some parts that I struggled to read due to handwriting. If I can't read something, I'm not likely to keep looking at future pages. I see that you eventually did start using digital text. I would edit the first few pages to have the digital text.

When you have a new page to upload, you don't have to delete pages. You can go into the release via your admin page, and then click on the gear icon below the page you want to change. From there, click on "image asset" and then upload the new page. That way you don't have to lose the stats.

#3: I like the idea of it being different perspectives from all the different roommates. I'd be curious to see how this develops, and you can manage all of them. Great set up so far! I wonder what mysterious threat just appeared!

Thank you so much for the critique! I’ll provide a link next time, I guess I forgot to add it. 😅. I did take note of the hand writing and changed to text later on.

Is this supposed to be read in scrolling format? You have a good sense for camera angle and tension build up (that chapter 5...), but the margin and panel spacings are uneven that it gets distracting whether I read in vertical or page format, so I wasn't sure. Really big panel spacings made it feel like there's a notable long pause before the next panel happens, but I'm pretty sure it usually wasn't the intended effect here.

This other point is more of a personal input, but you might want to try experimenting with smaller panel size for scenes that happen more briefly and larger ones for scenes with longer duration or important scenes.

No, it’s not meant for scrolling. It’s made to be pages. I only do two big panels since it allows me to cram more detail in and also allows me to get them out and made quickly. Spacing wise, I do agree. The black lines are mainly there as a result of my process for making the backgrounds. I will definitely keep your input in mind! Thank you! :D