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The-Triskele-Sisters posted Nov 30, 2024

First time comic producer here! Looking for any tips!

Hey all! Just wanted to say first of all thanks for taking the time to check out my comic! 

So far I feel i have a some flow and dialogue errors here and there which I want to fix in the 2nd issue! Feel free to crit away! I want to get better with this series as the years go by. 

I planned this many years ago as a computer game to begin with. My skills are mainly in that, but I have always loved to tell stories and comics are such a cool place to tell them quickly so here I am! 

Click the link below! 
The Triskele Sisters

Feel free to post your comics here and ill crit back if you want! 

ArtCrumbs admin posted Dec 10, 2024

Hello there, welcome to the platform! I've taken a look at your comic and have some feedback for you

1. I love the BW and spot color/red treatment. It's one of my favorite color schemes for comics.
2. The paneling is a bit... overwhelming? Almost every single panel is an oblique/diagonal/breakout panel. Those are "fun" panel types, but can easy be "too much" for a reader.
3. There seemed to be a major font change in the next chapter/section? Is there a specific reason? It's a pretty big change.
4. Overall, it's drawn incredibly well. Lots of good dynamic action poses and angles.

Overall great work on this!

Riddlemanstarboy posted Dec 29, 2024

As you mentioned, there's a lot of dialogue errors with spelling and grammar. Personally, I think that kind of distracts the reader from the panels, especially since they're so detailed and intense.

The art is spectacular, definitely more detailed than what I typically draw for my panels. The art is very strong for every panel which COULD be considered a bad thing by some people, but I personally like when there's a bunch of panels like that. The best metaphor I can think of for it is expecting to sample a bunch of cheeses but consistently tasting blue cheese each time.

Overall, good work