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Craig-B posted May 15, 2023

Just getting started - feedback appreciated

Hello Globalcomix community, really glad that I found this site and hope that it continues to grow and prosper. I have just started posting pages for my webcomic "Tate Earthlander". I am trying to capture a bit of the "Paper girls" esthetic, but in a comic that is appropriate for 8 to 12 year old readers. Any feedback is appreciated - https://globalcomix.com/c/tate-earthlander
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pointlessfield posted May 18, 2023

i havn't really heard of paper girls so i'll comment what i can without prior knowledge to it
i like the premise and find it interesting, feels a bit like planet of the apes in some way. the backgrounds and overall atmosphere are also very well made and fit the story perfectly
the one gripe i do have could be the face expressions on the human girl, they feel a bit weak and could probably be amped up a bit.

Craig-B posted May 18, 2023

Appreciate the input, thank you for taking a look.