Eclipse Era of The Beast - 4 Chapters Up

Wanted to get some insight on how the story is taking - it's been a little difficult to spot my blind spots, as I have this story embedded in my head from start to finish.  Want to make sure things make sense, if the pacing is okay, etc. 

https://globalcomix.com/c/vol-1-era-of-the-beast-

In a land plagued by undying souls shattered into their mortal bodies, an unwilling hero must rise to meet their destined duty to restore the wavering energies of the universe. The Fallen, threaten life's very existence when the balance of all things shifts for the worse. When the Tendrils of Fate pass over, The Era of the Beast shall either end in restored harmony or collapse under chaotic frequencies that hold reality together.In a land plagued by undying souls shattered into their mortal bodies, an unwilling hero must rise to meet their destined duty to restore the wavering energies of the universe. The Fallen, threaten life's very existence when the balance of all things shifts for the worse. When the Tendrils of Fate pass over, The Era of the Beast shall either end in restored harmony or collapse under chaotic frequencies that hold reality together.

Initial thoughts are appreciated!