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Supernaturally (a supernatural series based in the 1990s) - Feedback?
Let me start by saying I have a LOT of comic series, though the manager for my small press has passed away, and Amazon has removed our store from their site. Therefore, I have decided to make my series free, in the hopes that some of my readers might simply show me a bit of support by choice later down the road (although that's not what this post is about, lol).
Supernaturally is my oldest current series, and I have redone & revised it several times over the years before landing on the current and final version. It means quite a lot to me, and I have recently just finished chapter 17, finally picking the series up again after not working on it for a good long while. It's a back-in-time tale of supernatural events unfolding in a small Texas town during the 1990s, and I would very much like to keep it going strong from here on.
However, since I've lost nearly my entire readership, I would greatly appreciate some new feedback from fresher eyes to the series. Thank you so much if you decide to give Supernaturally a chance.
You can find Supernaturally here; The Supernaturally Series
thanks for posting. Just read the first issue and I like the basic idea. One nitpicky thing but I'm not sure if homeschooling was a thing in 1978, I could be wrong. Also curious why you set it i 78 but I suppose reading more may answer that.
Advice I often hear for writing is show your characters doing stuff and not telling. You have that tornado sequence, but we don't see the character actually stopping the tornado. I feel like we ought to see that. Also, the family just seems to be really accepting that an angel is living with them. Anyway, I will go back and read more. Good stuff.