Hi I'm writing a fantasy/horror story set in a world that's vaguely based around the 17th and 19th centuries. As I was finishing the planning period, I changed the world-building so that the continents would move around a lot faster than they do in reality. (I'm talking crazy fast) However, I realized that since...
@McIver
United States
Member since Feb 2024
re: Feedback for Karamador, especially about if it has too much text
Dude the first chapter rocks hell yeah. Did you draw this on paper? Some of the shading is like actually crazy. I only read the first two chapters but I do have a few small bits of advice. In the second chapter, there is a lot of text. First and foremost, you probably want to reduce the number of words being said in each panel (because the readers...
McIvercomix
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Feedback wanted for Black and Brown character designs