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First 11 Pages
I've just started posting my comics on this site and I'm hoping to build an audience here. I'd love feedback on the first 11 pages of my first issue of Pistol Shrimp. I'm charging $0.99 for the full book and was curious if the preview I'm offering feels too long or too short or provides any desire at all to continue reading. Any tips are appreciated.
Here's a link for those curious: https://globalcomix.com/c/pistol-shrimp
1. Always add a link when asking for feedback. : )
2. I think the story is very clever, art is beautiful, and done very well. I enjoyed reading it! I think that the lettering is generally nice too, save for some of the line spacing issues in the shark scene. The font for the sharks is a bit hard to read as is, so I would suggest adding a bit more space between lines to let that text breathe. Additionally, try not to shrink it too much more, it's already kind of small on my 27" screen.
3. As for your preview free pages, more than adequate. I think it's perfect.
Thanks for checking it out! I really appreciate the feedback ArtCrumbs!