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Memo333 posted Jan 4, 2024

sOME FEEDBack can be nice

Im taking a leap of faith and using this web toons vertical infinite format.

im a total noob at it but I think its going well.

Plz check my manga TOO if you can and gime some tips to improve, thx!

jrose1 posted Jan 4, 2024

The vertical format reads really good. I like the characters you drew, but it's kinda jarring when you use the different backgrounds and stuff. My advice would maybe be to practice drawing your own environments. It will most likely seem really tough at first, but they usually can be broken down into simple shapes. If you use photoshop or something similar, you can add a lot of depth to environments and background by setting stuff up on multiple layers.

Memo333 posted Jan 11, 2024

thx ! just added part 4 of chapter 7!