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HAII PLEASE COME AND TELL ME THINGS :3
Hey everyone! I've just began my series Beat Your Heart Out! almost a month ago on a different platform and I just started uploading it on here :3! I would love some feedback on the first 4 episodes if you can! its written in both English and Spanish so sorry if thats a deal breaker for you lol
heres a pic of them being silly for halloween 
Hey there!
I really love the cover pic in here, great use of colour! Hopefully you can find time to do that treatment with the main manga panels, would look sweet!
As for crits my only real one is just to use text that is computer generated with an easy to read font...its a little hard for me to read some words even though you're neat with your handwriting it still is difficult for some people to read I feel. Love the flow of the manga though! Drawings are cute! Good job!