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FromChris posted Jul 28, 2023

Feedback Needed - Mobile Vertical Format

Hey Everyone, 
First time comic creator here - looking to get some feedback on my vertical scrolling comic. It's action/scifi with some light NSFW (censored link below).

Happy to receive any feedback, but I'm most worried about the pacing / spacing for this vertical format. My primary focus is for mobile devices - I noticed it certainly doesn't look as good on desktop viewing.

Preview Link

Thank you!

ArtCrumbs admin posted Jul 28, 2023

I think it looks just fine on desktop as well, though I have a 27" screen. I enjoyed it, great work. I love the art style!

FromChris posted Jul 28, 2023

Thanks, I appreciate it!

DigitalNinja posted Jul 28, 2023

Reads pretty well to me. Great art, and I really dig that paper texture!

FromChris posted Jul 29, 2023

Thanks, me too!

SoloBen posted Aug 5, 2023

You really utilized the scroll format! Great work as well.

FromChris posted Aug 10, 2023

Thank you all again, I refined and published! First webtoon / comic, woohoo... Feels good! 3 episodes out and a lot more to go!