General Feedback

Oooh! It looks nice on a first glance! I'll be sure to read it this week! Thank you for sharing!

Hello, nice job with your comic! I'm not gonna comment on the story because I only read chapter 4 since I figured it would be the latest you've drawn.

First of all, maybe it is common in some type of webcomics to not use tails on the ballons, but I was confused at times who were speaking without them.

You are very good at drawing the characters in this clean style and keeping them consistent. But I notice that they appear a bit stiff and flat at times. I tried demonstrating on this panel some changes that would make the characters more dynamic.

I also did a simple correction on the perspective for the same panel:

If these are areas you want to improve in there are many great tutorials that explain more on the subjects.
Here's one about making figures more dynamic: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=t-crXRMju-Y
And here's one on perspective: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5lPfz3BFxCM

Hopefully this is helpful and I hope it's ok that I did a drawover on your comic. Let me know if my feedback is confusing or if you have any other questions.
Keep it up!