Need feedback on my dark fantasy comic "Orpheus Bloody Requiem"

Hello,
My name is Steven Kurusawa and I'm new in this community, I have made a dark fantasy comic "Orpheus Bloody Requiem", its completely free and you can find the first chapter  here:

https://globalcomix.com/c/orpheus-bloody-requiem

I would love to get some feedback on it, it is a bit different than a traditional comic, every panel is a full vertical or horizontal page, the aim is to make it more immersive or cinematic, its designed to be read in one sitting, like watching an episode of a tv series.

I would really appreciate if some of you can read it and give me some feedback.

Thank you so much!