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Anyone want to give some feedback?
Heya!
I'm currently working on volume 2 of my story and editing a bit of the dialogue and drawings along the way.
That said, anyone wanna give some feedback on the current pages of the story?
The link to it is here: Volume 2 pages
I'd love to hear some thoughts and feedback (what you and think could be touched on)
One thing I would like to suggest is using different line weights to help separate the foreground from the bg. The characters should have a heavy outline when up front, and objects in the back very light weights. It helps the reader focus on the subject so that they don't have to visually separate the objects in the panel.
Thanks for the feedback! :)
Do others have some feedback for any of the comics I do as well?