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Release #1 - Alma

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2.9K views • May 29, 2022
russ-merritt

russ-merritt 3 years ago

Refreshingly different! I like the fact that all the answers aren't there yet. There's plenty there that I want to know. Leaves me wanting more. The art style fits with the story and the sequence is well paced. I am an older comic reader myself, (started reading them in 1962) and was never a fan of Buffy. The concept was good, but the teen angst (of every WB show) was just too annoying. Back pain and sore knees I understand and empathize with. There are a couple visual holes though. When Alma is in the garden, she has her walker - I actually have one just like it., but when I'm using my walker, I don't keep my cane with me, and it would be especially hard to hold onto the walker and carry a cane that looked like a cross between the staff of Moses and the stick Wayne Gretzky used to win his 10th Hat Trick with. You would need three hands to hold onto the walker and juggle the staff. It's just too awkward. Even a regular cane is impractical with that model walker. Maybe most younger readers won't think about it, but it jumps out like a neon Girls, girls, girls sign next to a church to me.

JohnH985

JohnH985 3 years ago

Thanks for the kind words about Alma. I'm getting to the point where I emphasize with Alma's aches and pains myself. Actually that wasn't supposed to be a walker in her garden. It was one of those seats you can use to help push yourself up if you're kneeling in the ground. It did end up looking too much like a walker though. Yea, the cane is a little big, lol. But she's going to need it to fight the bad guys. The second issue is with the Artist Hernan now and it'll be done before long, he's pretty fast. And I agree, the art is great. Again thanks for the nice words and I hope you continue to read and enjoy the series.

ArtCrumbs

ArtCrumbs admin 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this! Alma definitely took it with stride, it's a big responsibility! She kicked some grass! hehe Is there going to be more?

JohnH985

JohnH985 3 years ago

Yes, the second issue is with Hernan right now, so I figure he'll have it done within the month. So the second issue will be out shortly and then we'll start on issue three.

JohnH985

JohnH985 3 years ago

I hope that means you like it!

Linwelly

Linwelly 3 years ago

I'm in love with Alma, this is a story type I need with an older woman in the lead. I love her level headedness and how she still has to do the mundane things, excited for more!

DrAlanR

DrAlanR 3 years ago

This is really, really great! Maybe you just caught me at the right time with the right words, but what you wrote about your mom is really touching. Looking forward to future installments!

artseyestudio

artseyestudio 2 years ago

I really enjoyed your comic. Great illustration style and use of black and white. Thank you for allowing us to see your work...congratulations!