
CharlieDVan
Laylabelle97
I like the highlights in her lipstick.
Laylabelle97
her sticking with Dave reminds me of when I hate a job but I canāt find a better one so I have to put up with the bullshit. sheās staying with him cuz her past says she canāt get anything better
Laylabelle97
I like the water color texture on her runny mascara
Linwelly
if only she had kept the anger to really get rid of him
CharlieDVan
@Laylabelle97: I really wanted to show that Dave had really always been Dave, just with a good mask on. one that Monroe doesn't see until it's too late
Laylabelle97
@CharlieDVan: thatās how abusers are. they blindside their victims by revealing their true self once itās too late
CharlieDVan
@Laylabelle97: it's a clip studio asset, it makes the process really easy
Linwelly
he was manipulative from the got go

Chapter 2: Red Flags and Pink Shades Part 2
Linwelly
Dave always has been a creepy fuck
Laylabelle97
good job showing Dave having some charm. seeing her home life and that she didnāt reach for the steering wheel shows why she wouldnāt immediately be put off by that huge red flag

Chapter 1: Red Flags and Pink Shades Part 1
Laylabelle97
shit itās been a while since I used this app idk how to like an ep
glozano
excelente primer capĆtulo! en el momento que el la vio fue su presa!
lennonade1964
after everything is said and done im glad the evil Solange apologized to her. it doesnt fix she did but even she has remorse. Terra could never. i like to think although evil Solange is evil she contained a bit of goodness in the same way Solange contained a bit of evil.
lennonade1964
its amazing what an im sorry can do. Solange basically killed the entire planet. every single living thing died at her hand and still because of the remorse she felt, she got to go to the afterlife. Terra only needed to feel an ounce of remorse. thats it. Solange's remorse acting basically as an absolution of her sins. like I've said in the past. Solange is a worthy god and although commited evil, still remained worthy at her core. she did worse things that Terra in the short term but Terra systematically preyed on women and only helped in return for them to be sexual slaves. his evil is not only worse but something he didnt ever regret. not even in death.
lennonade1964
YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! Terra got ehst was coming to him! he made a big mistake turning his back to Vierno. his ego got him killed for sure. did he really think he could threateningly talk back to Vierno and walk out of there? im glad Vierno followed through with the kill. i think she is just so cool! Vierno is so bad ass, she was the perfect one to kill Terra too!
lennonade1964
im so happy they had their reunion! it has been so lang and they deserve to be together. Xochitl cried for 6,500 years. she never got over Solange. it is so sad but also beautiful, the devotion i mean. im glad Catrina set Solange free. they did it unwillingly kind of, which is upsetting, but they still did it.
lennonade1964
the afterlife for Xochitl is agonizing. To sit there thinking you'll be forgotten by your love is heartbreaking. its sad that both Solange and Xochitl existed in a state of torment for 6,500 years. Catrina makes me so mad with their disregard for Xochitl's feelings or the fact that maybe she could have stopped Solange.
lennonade1964
Catrina has no right to be angry. everything Vierno said was true. The faces the Luune made were the least Catrina deserved. they deserve the judgement. Vierno was right, Catrina didnt care and only judged.
lennonade1964
it is very noble of Vierno to forgive what Solange did. after all it wasnt really the true Solange. it makes me happy that Vierno makes that promise to Solange to help her be set free.
lennonade1964
i like that Solange and Vierno share that good nature and resistance to being worshipped. The good Solange is a good person and a worthy god and in the same vein, Vierno is also just as worthy.
CharlieDVan
@zombietigressart: ššš she is baby girl
lennonade1964
Well now it begins everything that happens in āOnly Seasonsā. You can see in Luunes's face that she is worried About Solange talking to herself. This has been a wonderful story with great art and beautiful storytelling. I am very happy to have gotten a chance to go along for the ride while it was still being actively posted. You did a great job! Thank you for your stories!
CharlieDVan
@NeonKitty1236: sorry, I had to make one of the chapters for pay so I can get paid for all of them
NeonKitty1236
@CharlieDVan: dont say sorry i dont have premium so i wouldnt be able to read this if it had more than one comic on pay
lennonade1964
Its kind of but not really Solanges fault. She gave control but she had no idea it was going to end like that. Red eyed Solange is focused on keeping her alive. I know she wants to die but red eyed Solange never lied about her objective. At least she isnt in the cage anymore.
lennonade1964
Ha! Terra is too late to bring the oracle to Catrina! Terra doesnt want to take blame but he did in fact kill them all himself with his indirect influence. Finally Terra gets whats Coming to him. I love the terror in his face and the gore is perfection. He wanted everyone to know his power and caused the end of the world and not by his power. The glowing effect is awesome. You can see her charge up. The frame of her standing over him is gold. I feel so many things in that moment. Satisfaction, fear, joy, anger. It is really good. I hope it was painful for him.
lennonade1964
Its true that Catrina's inaction is also partly to blame for the world burning. They could have brought Xochitl back but decided to stay uninvolved. There is so much anger in Solange's face when shes driving her hand through Catrina's heart. Its crazy that the whole world is burning, everyone is dying For Terraās actions.
lennonade1964
I love that its like the muffled silence in Terraās ears as Ciel is calling out to him. He is so screwed. Does he not understand what a prophecy is? Its like a thing that is for sure going to happen. He should have come to terms with this after he killed Xochitl. He was dead from that moment on. I love the fear that he is feeling he deserves every bit of it. Seeing Ciel with her guts hanging out and that look on her face is disturbing. I absolutely love the gore in this story. Keep up the great work.
lennonade1964
āNone of you can match my radianceā is the hardest line ever written. It felt like a movie in that moment. She is incredible and honestly despite her being bad i still am in awe at her power. She completely destroyed all the demi gods. They burned and bubbled away into ash. The gore is top notch. I love that she just gets more powerful as time goes on. Boom! Right through the skull! Ember got destroyed. I cant believe she thought they were going to win that whole ordeal. The frame of Solange standing in the fire is really good.
lennonade1964 1 year ago
not shaking her hand was rude. I dont understand how she's trash when she's graduating with honors. it's so cringe him saying mother. how are you going to do coke but still say mommy basically. his mom has no power when she forbids Monroe from seeing Dave. plus it was the worst time to say I love you and he did it anyway. the way his mom acts it's almost a blessing for her husband that he died.