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Wirecats

Wirecats 1 year ago

another great story. interesting to see the moments where Dave MIGHT have gone the other way. clearly he didn't, and like the twins, I shed no tears for him. Monroe clearly ended up a good mom too

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Wirecats: thanks for reading! I'm currently working on another prequel where we explore Darcy's youth and his upbringing, his complex relationship with his brother, and all his loveless relationships!

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

8 years is still good. everyone goes at there own pace. someone told me the only way to fail is to not do it and that is true.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

his abuse is endless. his words mean nothing though, he doesn't amount to anything at all. why listen to drivel from a nobody?

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

she punched him so hard he knew he fucked up and apologized. what's crazy is right after this whole thing he's probably going to go cheat.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

she shouldnt have apologized for hitting him. he's not even sure he deserved it. he said " I THINK I deserved it. plus you don't apologize for hitting back.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

Dave probably cheated and doesn't like that she could have gotten back at him. she stayed true even though he treats her bad. the guy really went for it and I dont believe Dave could take anyone in a fight so he would just get beat up real bad and cope by ODing again.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

I dont understand why he wants her so bad if he going to look at other women so obviously and be so wishy washy.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

they were so close to meeting it hurts. she only saw Dave.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

he was worried about her. he just didn't want her harm or death on his hands. there's no way he actually gives a shit.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

punching the wall is not the cool big boy move he thinks it is.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

whats with him just going around ruining women's lives. plus that is such a bad way to look at it. that they are bonded now. she can be free if she thinks she can.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

his sorry's mean absolutely nothing. she shouldnt fall for his tricks.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

getting up to work is so hard when you are depressed. I think she is really doing a big thing getting up to go job hunting. she even got one in the same day.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

he can't even handle the thought that ge hurt her. it is impossible to conceive for him.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

man Monroe is working like 85 hours a week. Dave is so ungrateful, he doesn't even have to earn what he has. he has never had to earn what he has. he said he wouldn't do coke in front of her. stopping coke in general is the natural next step. he can't honestly think that he can cheat and think he just tell her to calm down. people kill people for stuff like that. so he cheats and she loses everything? that's bullshit she shouldnt have taken him back. she should have let him die in the hall.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

Dave not working is embarrassing. leaving her to do it by herself. Wow the apartment! that's how she got it? her dad is all tearing up proud but her saying she's been grown up for a long time is not a good thing. that was good advice, even if it wasnt from the best role model.

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

not shaking her hand was rude. I dont understand how she's trash when she's graduating with honors. it's so cringe him saying mother. how are you going to do coke but still say mommy basically. his mom has no power when she forbids Monroe from seeing Dave. plus it was the worst time to say I love you and he did it anyway. the way his mom acts it's almost a blessing for her husband that he died.

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

I like the highlights in her lipstick.

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

her sticking with Dave reminds me of when I hate a job but I can’t find a better one so I have to put up with the bullshit. she’s staying with him cuz her past says she can’t get anything better

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

I like the water color texture on her runny mascara

Linwelly

Linwelly 1 year ago

if only she had kept the anger to really get rid of him

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

@CharlieDVan: that makes sense

Linwelly

Linwelly 1 year ago

he should never have mocked her dreams

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Laylabelle97: I really wanted to show that Dave had really always been Dave, just with a good mask on. one that Monroe doesn't see until it's too late

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

@CharlieDVan: that’s how abusers are. they blindside their victims by revealing their true self once it’s too late

CharlieDVan

CharlieDVan 1 year ago

@Laylabelle97: it's a clip studio asset, it makes the process really easy

Linwelly

Linwelly 1 year ago

he was manipulative from the got go

Linwelly

Linwelly 1 year ago

Dave always has been a creepy fuck

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

good job showing Dave having some charm. seeing her home life and that she didn’t reach for the steering wheel shows why she wouldn’t immediately be put off by that huge red flag

Laylabelle97

Laylabelle97 1 year ago

shit it’s been a while since I used this app idk how to like an ep

glozano

glozano 1 year ago

excelente primer capítulo! en el momento que el la vio fue su presa!

lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

Solanges regret is exactly the reason she deserves to be in the afterlife with Xochitl. she didnt want to do all the things evil Solange did. Xochitl is a good listener. even after hearing the word replacement, she stayed strong and kept herself in the coversation. they picked up right where they left off. The art has gotten better and better with time. although im sad its over, im happy for the ending we got. This has truely been a remarkable story. I see all the love and hard work you put into it. I love your storytelling and the art you bless us with. you were meant to tell these stories and I've been moved by it all. thank you for everything you have done, do and will do!

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lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

after everything is said and done im glad the evil Solange apologized to her. it doesnt fix she did but even she has remorse. Terra could never. i like to think although evil Solange is evil she contained a bit of goodness in the same way Solange contained a bit of evil.

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lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

its amazing what an im sorry can do. Solange basically killed the entire planet. every single living thing died at her hand and still because of the remorse she felt, she got to go to the afterlife. Terra only needed to feel an ounce of remorse. thats it. Solange's remorse acting basically as an absolution of her sins. like I've said in the past. Solange is a worthy god and although commited evil, still remained worthy at her core. she did worse things that Terra in the short term but Terra systematically preyed on women and only helped in return for them to be sexual slaves. his evil is not only worse but something he didnt ever regret. not even in death.

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lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

YEAH! YEAH! YEAH! Terra got ehst was coming to him! he made a big mistake turning his back to Vierno. his ego got him killed for sure. did he really think he could threateningly talk back to Vierno and walk out of there? im glad Vierno followed through with the kill. i think she is just so cool! Vierno is so bad ass, she was the perfect one to kill Terra too!

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lennonade1964

lennonade1964 1 year ago

im so happy they had their reunion! it has been so lang and they deserve to be together. Xochitl cried for 6,500 years. she never got over Solange. it is so sad but also beautiful, the devotion i mean. im glad Catrina set Solange free. they did it unwillingly kind of, which is upsetting, but they still did it.