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I have written and illustrated a short story named "Chameleon Code" which I'm releasing in two parts. The first part is ready if you'd like to check it out.
Chameleon Code is an action thriller set in a distant future, where everyday life is tightly controlled by electronic devices and AI. The protagonist is Detective Anima Sinner. As he prepares for a brief vacation, Detective Sinner identifies Chameleon, a digital identity thief connected to one of the recent cases his investigative agency is handling.
https://globalcomix.com/c/chameleon-code/chapters/en/1/1
Hi Ale. Yeah, had a look. Wow, hardcore. Good ink. Great art. I find the pages to be very busy and a bit confusing. My problem. I'm guessing lots of fans get off on that style. I'm giving you 9/10. Good stuff! You obviously know your way around comics. Very professional. Respect.
Thank you very much @Zmax. I usually just draw and I don't write scripts. So this project was born in between other works just to have something totally mine. And I must admit...that in going from the script to the drawing part... I immediately realized that I had to split several pages...because there were too many things happening per page. So it has been a very good exercise for me!!! I hope with the next story to break the story down a little better!!