Death Of A Crescent Moon

Hi kazart, yeah, checked it out on namicomi. I think your art is very good. A good standard throughout. Nice drawing. I'm not the one to comment on Manga style or the story. I'm somewhat ignorant about all that stuff. Thanks for posting. I hope it all goes good for you.

Thanks for checking it out. You can just tell me your personal opinion on what you think of the story, that would be fine.

Hi, I declined to give opinions before simply because your comic content isn't my sort of gig. Just like my stuff wouldn't be what you're into. Let me put it this way, it's like a heavy metal rock musician being asked to give an opinion about a rap song. They're two different worlds. There is of course some crossover, such as the art in this case. Good art is good art in anybody's language. But as for story content, I have no common core of experience with the content you create to be able to evaluate. I'm sure your target audience will love it. It's probably fabulous, but I'm not the one to judge. I hope you understand and all goes well for you. Respect!

Hi. The story looks interesting. I haven't read any manga, so I was a bit confused on the order on some of the speech bubbles. Especially on the 9th page, Yono responds but the grandfather didn't ask him anything, the same thing in an earlier page. On the page with his morning routine, though it's right to left, I was still abit confused. Maybe try and order the panels in order to guide the eyes since there is no dialogue