The City of Shadows first chapter out. Looking for feedback

Hi

My name's Daniel. I just published the first chapter in a collaboration i am doing with the Brazilian artist Guma. It's an urban fantasy slice of life/Magical Realist series that is inspired by Graffiti and Jamaican music. I wanted to know what people thought of the writing and art. 

Here is some info about the book:

Title: The City of Shadows
Genre: Supernatural, Cyberpunk, Slice of life, Fantasy 

Comic description:
Cities are places full of life. Millions of people living together with their stories, myths, triumphs, and tragedies forming the soul of an urban expanse. The City of Shadows is no different. A Collaboration between Jamaican-Canadian writer Daniel G. Wilson and Brazilian Artist Guma. This series aims to offer a glimpse into the often ignored sides of urban life. Cities are places full of life. Millions of people living together with their stories, myths, triumphs, and tragedies forming the soul of an urban expanse. The City of Shadows is no different. A Collaboration between Jamaican-Canadian writer Daniel G. Wilson and Brazilian Artist Guma. This series aims to offer a glimpse into the often ignored sides of urban life

You can read all chapters for free here: https://globalcomix.com/c/city-of-shadows

Thanks.