Release #2 - Chapter 2: Confrontation
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Issue 2
Chapter 2: Confrontation
1.8K views • Jun 11, 2026
John is seduced by the walls allure, only to be stopped by a mysterious cyborg bent on blaming him for the wall opening, and the carnage that followed.
JavTen10 5 days ago
The art is incredible, but the story needs heavy work. 1. The reader is being thrown uncomfortably into the story, I have no idea what is happening or who the characters are. 2. The characters. they don't have much time to be introduced before the story kicks off. We are given a name and that is it. Add some pages to tell us enough about the characters to understand their goals and dreams. Who they know, who they do what they do for. 3. I really enjoyed the art, while I could never dream of drawing this good, it needs touch ups. I may be splitting hairs here but sometimes the body proportions and movements felt off, while the art quality would change often. Now here comes the good parts: 1. The story feels very similar to Attack on Titan, but it has the nice cyberpunk/futuristic feel that makes it stand out. It takes the same idea of a mysterious wall with danger on the other side but walks in the opposite direction. 2. I love the characters designs they all feel different but have a connection to eachother to show that theybelong in the same world. 3. The story does well with horror, but it gives me a more slasher horror vibe than creepy horror vibe. Overall great story, I hope you continue with this, and I hope most of all you learn and grow, have a great day, your new fan, JavTen10
TomsComics 5 days ago
Wow! This is incredible feedback thank you so much! I have a hard time seeing outside the story when I’m in it so much so this outside perspective is beyond valuable and I will definitely rework the second chapter! Also, if you think the art is good now, whoo boy wait for chapter 3.