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Starting to rework chapter 2. This will include a bit of exposition to explain the story and world a bit, but it will still be fun. No massive text wall dumps if I can help it!

Also Chapter 3 coming along nicely, one page a day. Worked on the framing in each panel past page 15~ish a lot more, a skill I used to have down but must’ve lost along the way.

Also, If anyone would like to do chapter plugs with me, please let me know!

Chapter 3 now being drawn! I worked out the rest of the story fully so expect stuff to get REAL!!! (Real) soon. Also I had mixed up some pages on my last chapter that I have arranged properly now, been punching myself all morning! How did I miss that.

Also, was wondering if anyone wanted to see weekly updates? I make around 5 or more pages a week so I could do updates weekly or every few days. I can also stick to the chapterly releases. It says quarterly on Wall Theory but that was kind of a required input that I didn't give much thought.

Chapter 2 RELEASED!!

Chapter 2: Confrontation

1.8K views • Jun 11, 2026

John is seduced by the walls allure, only to be stopped by a mysterious cyborg bent on blaming him for the wall opening, and the...

The art is incredible, but the story needs heavy work. 1. The reader is being thrown uncomfortably into the story, I have no idea what is happening or who the characters are. 2. The characters. they don't have much time to be introduced before the story kicks off. We are given a name and that is it. Add some pages to tell us enough about the characters to understand their goals and dreams. Who they know, who they do what they do for. 3. I really enjoyed the art, while I could never dream of drawing this good, it needs touch ups. I may be splitting hairs here but sometimes the body proportions and movements felt off, while the art quality would change often. Now here comes the good parts: 1. The story feels very similar to Attack on Titan, but it has the nice cyberpunk/futuristic feel that makes it stand out. It takes the same idea of a mysterious wall with danger on the other side but walks in the opposite direction. 2. I love the characters designs they all feel different but have a connection to eachother to show that theybelong in the same world. 3. The story does well with horror, but it gives me a more slasher horror vibe than creepy horror vibe. Overall great story, I hope you continue with this, and I hope most of all you learn and grow, have a great day, your new fan, JavTen10

TomsComics 5 days ago

Wow! This is incredible feedback thank you so much! I have a hard time seeing outside the story when I’m in it so much so this outside perspective is beyond valuable and I will definitely rework the second chapter! Also, if you think the art is good now, whoo boy wait for chapter 3.