An alien has appeared on Earth, systematically mowing down humans —approximately one every second. It starts by killing those who attack it. Then the ones who gave the order. Then the ones who came up with the idea of giving the order. This world has already lived through “Bloody Thursday,” when thirty-seven nations lost their presidents and prime ministers. In the new reality, everyone has resigned themselves to the alien — and to the endless, second-by-second deaths.
ok, finally interested. I went one more chapter just for a final chance, and its finally picking up to where im intrigued and interested. for how web comics go, and how short each chapter is, you gotta be able to hook the reader faster then the 4th chapter. it looks like its going to get pretty good, but most viewers will have already given up by chapter 2. I jist kep going on a whim bc I wanted to at least see something happen before I gave up. seriers has promise with an intro of some kind, or a fast start. maybe even just deleting the first few chapters and having them start as reporters in chapter 4, then go into backstory later. if chapter 4 was the first chapter,.id definetly be hooked from the start. either reorganize thw chapters and backstreet, add an intro, or delete scenes.
StraferHighwind 1 week ago
ok, finally interested. I went one more chapter just for a final chance, and its finally picking up to where im intrigued and interested. for how web comics go, and how short each chapter is, you gotta be able to hook the reader faster then the 4th chapter. it looks like its going to get pretty good, but most viewers will have already given up by chapter 2. I jist kep going on a whim bc I wanted to at least see something happen before I gave up. seriers has promise with an intro of some kind, or a fast start. maybe even just deleting the first few chapters and having them start as reporters in chapter 4, then go into backstory later. if chapter 4 was the first chapter,.id definetly be hooked from the start. either reorganize thw chapters and backstreet, add an intro, or delete scenes.