CreepyVerse
StraferHighwind
ok, finally interested. I went one more chapter just for a final chance, and its finally picking up to where im intrigued and interested. for how web comics go, and how short each chapter is, you gotta be able to hook the reader faster then the 4th chapter. it looks like its going to get pretty good, but most viewers will have already given up by chapter 2. I jist kep going on a whim bc I wanted to at least see something happen before I gave up. seriers has promise with an intro of some kind, or a fast start. maybe even just deleting the first few chapters and having them start as reporters in chapter 4, then go into backstory later. if chapter 4 was the first chapter,.id definetly be hooked from the start. either reorganize thw chapters and backstreet, add an intro, or delete scenes.
StraferHighwind
well, I guess someone came up with the idea of turning a dandelion seed pod into a killer alien? 🤷, too much buildup and backstreet for such an underwhelming alien threat even if its supposed to be an all powerful alien entity that can kill anyone thinking of harming it. I can see why im the first review as every chapter so far has 0 comments
StraferHighwind
well still nothing to catch my interest yet accept the last panel with the guys foot. makes me suspect somethings up with him. next chapter will decide if I think this is worth reading. bit of a slow start. think an intro chapter of who or what the rattler is would've been good, bc usually if you dont get my interest first 2 chapters I wont even give the rest a shot
StraferHighwind
Dunno what to think. first chapter didn't really reveal much other then theres some kind of alien invader. Will have to see future chapters as there wasn't enough to decide if I even like the comic yet.
StraferHighwind 1 week ago
okok, getting interesting now, cover-up, possibly conspiracy, and figuring out what's the truth. definetly starting to become a solid story.