Release #1 - Legacy Collection: Rite of Passage
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Legacy Collection: Rite of Passage
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Far away, on planet RIMA III, princess Lyandra has to face a hidden threat, protect the Free City of Kraz and save her family legacy from complete annihilation.
This is the first chapter of a discontinued series. Yet, these characters and parts of this story will come back in a future release.
Bearbarian 1 month ago
I really like how you’ve tied Kraz’s freedom to such a dark history it gives the city a layered, almost haunted identity
ENTIA 1 month ago
Thank you! Partially this is the reason why I had to discontinue this comic for now - both history of Kraz and Lyandra's family secret deserve a much deeper story then what the initial script had to offer. Fortunately, now I have also figured out a perfect way to tie this novel into a larger overarching narrative that connects all seemingly standalone stories as a singular series.
Juliette 2 weeks ago
This is such a fascinating setup I love how it blends lost history myth and emotion the alba part feels symbolic too what inspired you to create Rima
ENTIA 2 weeks ago
Actually, I just wanted to make something in fantasy with goblins. :) Rima III was my attempt to craft an alien world that looks very different to ours, but still very familiar. The process was pretty simple there: I leaned into the basic color theory, photo bashed few landscapes, colorized them "as I like" and fed to AI to turn them into finished illustrations. So, composition and colors are mine, only the final brush strokes are made by the machine.
ENTIA 2 weeks ago
Regarding the fauna - I had this idea of primitive people riding giant capybaras into battle. But, obviously since it's an alien world, capybaras turned purple - same color as some bushes may I point out. This way it becomes likely that these calm herbivorous creatures have evolved to hide from predators among those purple bushes. Also, species name Khimsha is derived from words “khinzir mishear” which loosely means “hairy pig” in Arabic.
Birds that are hunted by Lyandra are called Sariqal which means "Fruit Stealer". They were conceived as simple "alien bird with lizard traits" concept. I included them to show how morals of Lyandra differ from our modern understanding about animal cruelty - she hunts them for sport.
ENTIA 1 week ago
Speaking about this particular story - I have written it as a novel (4-6 issues) with a complex backstory that would be gradually revealed to the reader and twist everything upside down. The whole second issue was readily pre-visualised. It would revolve around Lyandra coming back to Kraz and trying to figure out who poisoned her royal family, and who she can still trust...
And that part was PACKED with tension, but narrative transition from the city walls to the ancient mountain of Zul felt like a slog. Plus, some characters, who I grew to love did not get enough development space. And the third act... It was OK, but also felt like wasted potential. Kind of. So I put this particular story on ice, until I'll completely rewrite the whole second half of it. As of now, I have produced plenty of notes, so the reworked Rite of Passage slowly grows into an amazing part of the overarching space saga. The release date is still TBA, because production of ELZA: BOOK 1 is my #1 priority at the moment.