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FEEL·GOOD Chapter 1- Prologue

136 views • Sep 05, 2025

Maggey meets a mysterious man after her parents are kidnapped by a unknown group.

Hi! I really like the art in this one. Would it be okay for me to give you some suggestions? I think the panel to panel storytelling rocks but there are a couple of relatively simple tweaks you could use to make this even cooler

snow122 4 weeks ago

Wow, I’m blown away by your writing it’s so good! Is the story over, or will you extend it?

MrSoggyPants 3 weeks ago

@MikoDoodles: I'm in the middle of the next chapter, so any feedback you have would definitely be appreciated :)

MrSoggyPants 3 weeks ago

@snow122: Currently in the middle of chapter 2 :)

snow122 3 weeks ago

That’s great to hear! I’ll definitely share feedback as I read excited to see how Chapter 2 is shaping up.
Did you have the artwork for your story made by an artist?

MrSoggyPants 3 weeks ago

@snow122: Writing and art are both done by myself. (i'll take your comment as a compliment, though.)

snow122 3 weeks ago

That’s really amazing you’re talented in both writing and art! And yes, it was definitely meant as a compliment.
By the way, I’ve also made a lot of cover arts would you like to see them?

MikoDoodles 2 weeks ago

@MrSoggyPants sorry for the late reply
I think your sequential art is really good and works well at telling the story, I think that some stuff is unnecessarily overexplained.the speech bubbles could also sometimes be a bit bigger, because sometimes they were a bit illegible. Overall good work that only needs some tweaks to get better.