MrSoggyPants
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Maggey reveals how her parents went missing, and Feel gets in trouble with the law.
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Maggey meets a mysterious man after her parents are kidnapped by a unknown group.
MrSoggyPants
@snow122: Writing and art are both done by myself. (i'll take your comment as a compliment, though.)
MikoDoodles
@MrSoggyPants sorry for the late reply
I think your sequential art is really good and works well at telling the story, I think that some stuff is unnecessarily overexplained.the speech bubbles could also sometimes be a bit bigger, because sometimes they were a bit illegible. Overall good work that only needs some tweaks to get better.