MrSoggyPants
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Maggey meets a mysterious man after her parents are kidnapped by a unknown group.
snow122 3 weeks ago
That’s really amazing you’re talented in both writing and art! And yes, it was definitely meant as a compliment.
By the way, I’ve also made a lot of cover arts would you like to see them?
MikoDoodles 2 weeks ago
@MrSoggyPants sorry for the late reply
I think your sequential art is really good and works well at telling the story, I think that some stuff is unnecessarily overexplained.the speech bubbles could also sometimes be a bit bigger, because sometimes they were a bit illegible. Overall good work that only needs some tweaks to get better.