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1: Issue #1
878 views • Dec 18, 2024
Detorama

Detorama 8 months ago

I'm so proud to have been part of this project!

TurningSilverEngineer

TurningSilverEngineer 8 months ago

This was very well done, so talented bro

WetFish976

WetFish976 8 months ago

I already want more

Griffster248

Griffster248 8 months ago

@Detorama: The project would not be possible without you! Thank you for your contribution!

Griffster248

Griffster248 8 months ago

@TurningSilverEngineer: Thank you so much for the kind words! More projects coming soon!

Griffster248

Griffster248 8 months ago

@WetFish976: Glad you enjoyed it! More projects coming soon!

AubDiamant

AubDiamant 4 months ago

this was, good very well done!

Griffster248

Griffster248 4 months ago

@AubDiamant thank you! Happy you enjoyed the comic.

AubDiamant

AubDiamant 4 months ago

@Griffster248: I featured it along with other comics in my blog today, I hope others check it out!

Griffster248

Griffster248 4 months ago

@AubDiamant That's so cool! Thank you so much for covering the book, really means a lot to me. I'd love to check out your blog, where can I find it?

AubDiamant

AubDiamant 4 months ago

@Griffster248: Kanme Studios.com under latest blog posts / What’s Kanme Reading?

AubDiamant

AubDiamant 4 months ago

@Griffster248: happy to support your comic!

AggregatingCelestialTiger887

AggregatingCelestialTiger887 2 months ago

Hey brother, I think you definately have an interesting starting point (what happens after death?). However, I feel you could use more of your imagination when showing images lf the afterlife...

AggregatingCelestialTiger887

AggregatingCelestialTiger887 2 months ago

@AggregatingCelestialTiger887:  Right now you still "tell" a lot, do you understand what I mean? I also feel you can benefit from an editor (sentences like "do you have to be perfect when going to heaven" can be replaced by "do you have to be good to go to heaven". Do you see the difference?).

AggregatingCelestialTiger887

AggregatingCelestialTiger887 2 months ago

@AggregatingCelestialTiger887: I do think you have talent, since you kept me reading, and not even seasoned writers can do that all the time ;). I also like the ending.

Griffster248

Griffster248 2 months ago

@AggregatingCelestialTiger887 Thank you taking the time to read the story and for your feedback! What Happens After Death was my first comic ever, and while I am extremely proud of it, I definitely understand I have room to grow as a writer. Again, thank you for your feedback and for your kind words as well, sir. Rest assured, my next comic project will definitely have an editor associated with it!