The question humanity has asked itself since the dawn of time: What Happens After Death?
This one-shot story explores the horrific/chaotic thoughts of a young boy named John, who has just experienced his first encounter with the concept of death. Will he find the definitive answer he's looking for? Read the story to find out!
Hey brother, I think you definately have an interesting starting point (what happens after death?). However, I feel you could use more of your imagination when showing images lf the afterlife...
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887: Right now you still "tell" a lot, do you understand what I mean? I also feel you can benefit from an editor (sentences like "do you have to be perfect when going to heaven" can be replaced by "do you have to be good to go to heaven". Do you see the difference?).
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887: I do think you have talent, since you kept me reading, and not even seasoned writers can do that all the time ;). I also like the ending.
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887 Thank you taking the time to read the story and for your feedback! What Happens After Death was my first comic ever, and while I am extremely proud of it, I definitely understand I have room to grow as a writer. Again, thank you for your feedback and for your kind words as well, sir. Rest assured, my next comic project will definitely have an editor associated with it!
Detorama 9 months ago
I'm so proud to have been part of this project!
TurningSilverEngineer 9 months ago
This was very well done, so talented bro
WetFish976 9 months ago
Amazing
WetFish976 9 months ago
I already want more
Griffster248 9 months ago
@Detorama: The project would not be possible without you! Thank you for your contribution!
Griffster248 9 months ago
@TurningSilverEngineer: Thank you so much for the kind words! More projects coming soon!
Griffster248 9 months ago
@WetFish976: Glad you enjoyed it! More projects coming soon!
AubDiamant 5 months ago
this was, good very well done!
Griffster248 5 months ago
@AubDiamant thank you! Happy you enjoyed the comic.
AubDiamant 5 months ago
@Griffster248: I featured it along with other comics in my blog today, I hope others check it out!
Griffster248 5 months ago
@AubDiamant That's so cool! Thank you so much for covering the book, really means a lot to me. I'd love to check out your blog, where can I find it?
AubDiamant 5 months ago
@Griffster248: Kanme Studios.com under latest blog posts / What’s Kanme Reading?
AubDiamant 5 months ago
@Griffster248: happy to support your comic!
AggregatingCelestialTiger887 3 months ago
Hey brother, I think you definately have an interesting starting point (what happens after death?). However, I feel you could use more of your imagination when showing images lf the afterlife...
AggregatingCelestialTiger887 3 months ago
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887: Right now you still "tell" a lot, do you understand what I mean? I also feel you can benefit from an editor (sentences like "do you have to be perfect when going to heaven" can be replaced by "do you have to be good to go to heaven". Do you see the difference?).
AggregatingCelestialTiger887 3 months ago
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887: I do think you have talent, since you kept me reading, and not even seasoned writers can do that all the time ;). I also like the ending.
Griffster248 3 months ago
@AggregatingCelestialTiger887 Thank you taking the time to read the story and for your feedback! What Happens After Death was my first comic ever, and while I am extremely proud of it, I definitely understand I have room to grow as a writer. Again, thank you for your feedback and for your kind words as well, sir. Rest assured, my next comic project will definitely have an editor associated with it!