JW Storytelling
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51 pages
Many years have passed since the fall of the kingdom of Sol-Ar and the Seto family’s exodus to the far south of the continent....
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Set roughly 18 years before the main story, this opening tale follows our future main character’s parents on the harrowing...
31 pages
With another one of Ted’s pursuers defeated, James returns to Emma to fill her in on what happened. As the days go by, James,...
29 pages
After surviving the attack from Deimos things finally start to look up for James and Ted. With everything going well at work and...
30 pages
Out of a job after his fight with Minerva, James decides to apply for an open bouncer position at a local nightclub. During his...
29 pages
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Now being attacked by a mysterious woman with inhuman strength, James must rely on his new companion, Ted, to fight back. Using...
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On a particularly dark and rainy night, James is working another late shift at his boring retail job when the time finally comes...
23 pages
Now recovered and more powerful than before, Joshua feels almost invincible as he continues his training. However, a trip to the...
30 pages
It’s been a month since Joshua’s battle with Kevin and he’s been in a coma ever since. As a worried Tony watches over him,...
29 pages
After overcoming yet another Spector ambush Joshua and Tony return to The Pulse empty handed, still only a party of two. As they...
29 pages
Having just discovered a dangerous new power Joshua unknowingly unleashes it on an enemy, with devastating results. Shocked by...
29 pages
Returning from their first official mission unsuccessful, Joshua and Tony are hit with hard truths and uncomfortable orders....
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With Joshua and Tony’s preliminary training complete, they find themselves on their first mission. Tasked with tracking down a...
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After escaping their pursuers Joshua, Tony, and Eva find themselves in front of a mysterious warehouse in the middle of nowhere....
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A fierce lightning storm rips through a busy city one night causing much mayhem and destruction, leaving a massive cleanup to be...
YEARofTheCollector 6 days ago (edited 5 days ago)
The Legend of Kyyden #1 is pretty interesting story. It's a coming of age tale, with an establishe history in a fantasy world. The story places the reader years following the aftermath of the fall of a kingdom. Dimitri is a 17 year old with no idea of the tumultuous history of his family. Unfortunately, the King and QUeen do not get the luxury of time to teach their son about any of it. The enemies of the Seto family have found their hidden village in the forest and they came looking for more of their blood. I would us the metaphor of "diamond in the rough" to describe this comic book. You can see the storytelling techniques from start to finish. The creators do take advantage of the medium to great lenghts: theres compressed, and decompressed story in different pages, good use of many camera angles and I even saw one of my my favorite staples in comics the De Lucca effect. So as far as knowing how to tell stories in a comic book format, the creators 100% get it. My only critique would be the art itself. It needs a little bit more refining. Especially in the details that go unnoticed at times. Like the empty backgrounds and the shading. I understand empty brackgounds can be an artistic choice to highlight a character on a scene, but I'm not a fan personally. Especially when its overused. The color saturation is pretty high and it does make the panels look flat. I would help to add some contrast here. With all that being said, I believe this is a good story overall and I wish this team continues to work together and improve each upon their craft. Best of Luck!