@zhengomono

Hello! I recently finished the first arc of my comic, Luma. I wanted to get some feedback on the overall story so far and would very much appreciate anyone willing to take a look! Thanks in advance! If you'd like, I will also provide feedback on your comic if requested.

https://globalcomix.com/c/luma

Testing this discussion feature. I wanna know what are you guys' favorite characters in the comic :D

Oh hey I think you are subbed to me on Tapas.

Take a look if you're still interested though xD

Luma:
https://globalcomix.com/c/luma
https://tapas.io/dashboard/index

Hi hi, you can call me Zhengo. I'm currently working on Luma. It's a fantasy action with shonen inspirations. The story focuses on a setting where gods rule over mortals more directly and control the environment around them. However, there are monstrous entities that lurk outside of the gods' gaze, and they task demigods to eliminate them. The story follows the demigods as they navigate through life and dealing with their role situated between gods and mortals.

Comic link: https://globalcomix.com/c/luma

This is a recent page I'm pretty proud of hehe

https://i.imgur.com/eMKwYQV.png

I'm mostly doing BW because of time issues. But I also just like some of the inking techniques that work better in BW, such as hatching and blocking sections in black (it can work in color, but you do have to be more careful about it in my experience)