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illustrator and writer of scifi biopunk comics ,if you want to support me you can do it by leaving a donation or through my ko-fi

re: Feedback on comic. Looking to improve.
@JanneKarneus Thank you for taking a look! :D


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re: Feedback on comic. Looking to improve.
I agree that a straightforward line or two clarifying Dre’s goal is needed. I do want him to have an internal conflict on if he should keep pursuing or should he quit, but I think that added line can make it clear of what Dre wants, it’s just a matter of can he overcome the challenges to actually achieve it. Thank you for the insight!

re: Feedback on comic. Looking to improve.
Thank you for taking a look and the feedback! Yes, the idea that Dre doesn’t want to let his brother’s memory down is his motivation to keep playing, but I will definitely try to make that much clearer in future installments.



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