@Riddlemanstarboy

I haven't officially published anything yet, but I always manage to procrastinate making the pages. I have ADHD and the meds I'm on do not work. I'm also in school full time. How do you guys manage deadlines?

As you mentioned, there's a lot of dialogue errors with spelling and grammar. Personally, I think that kind of distracts the reader from the panels, especially since they're so detailed and intense.

The art is spectacular, definitely more detailed than what I typically draw for my panels. The art is very strong for every panel which COULD be considered a bad thing by some people, but I personally like when there's a bunch of panels like that. The best metaphor I can think of for it is expecting to sample a bunch of cheeses but consistently tasting blue cheese each time.

Overall, good work