@Georgevegaart

Thanks for the feature!

I looked it over and read a little. 
If I were to comment on any areas that need improving it's the backgrounds and settings. 
it really helps when you have more backgrounds to place the reader in your world. 
This is a matter of practice and writing notes to yourself about locations and such. 
Comics are a lot of work and it's great to see you are willing to put in the time since I see a lot of pages. 
There are some great resources about creating comics on line and how to build a comic. 
I do some breakdowns on Youtube but you don't have to look me up, look up comic layouts on Youtube and that may help you with that process. 
Also you did not use the frames in your newest release. 
Hope this helps. 

OK, cool. Hmm...good questions/prompts.