The Detective is the right guy for her, because the best friend already knows so much about her already and the manager well he just wants to use her for one thing only. The detective loves her and is constantly worried about where she is and protective about who she hangs out with. He knows about the manager and what type of guy he is. All I'm saying is that the detective loves her and wants her to be safe.
I think you've nailed the boys down pretty well. I always wanted to do an chapter for Brennan's perspective. We never quite know what he's thinking although he's been a lot my open recently. I had an early chapter scripted out totally from his point of view...maybe we'll release that someday. So many things I want to do!