A story following a young man unaware of his origins, on his journey to find purpose in an ever evolving universe on a planet clearly not meant for him.
🤯I love the huge ass dome plasma fire hell move, bro evaporates a chunk of the RIVER‼️ The inner monologue was cool maybe a narrator could be used a bit more. I like when mc can just mc and not explain and just like scream the super move like “SUPER PLASMA BUBBLE BOMB”😭 this was a great chapter tho and super cool choreographed fights I can’t stop reaaaadind💯
@doomzde: happy u liked the two page spread lol and yea wanted it to feel like your in his head and his thought process with him but definitely get how in places a narrator could get things across more direct
doomzde 1 week ago
🤯I love the huge ass dome plasma fire hell move, bro evaporates a chunk of the RIVER‼️ The inner monologue was cool maybe a narrator could be used a bit more. I like when mc can just mc and not explain and just like scream the super move like “SUPER PLASMA BUBBLE BOMB”😭 this was a great chapter tho and super cool choreographed fights I can’t stop reaaaadind💯
IamItami 1 week ago
@doomzde: happy u liked the two page spread lol and yea wanted it to feel like your in his head and his thought process with him but definitely get how in places a narrator could get things across more direct