Hey thanks very much! It's my first time posting here so that's really encouraging. I'm glad you felt that way reading it, That was exactly the vibe I was going for. I'm sorry to say this, but unfortunately that was the end, it's meant to be abrupt like that, maybe I didn't make that clear in the description.
Oh cool, I'm not sure if I'll ever continue it, but I'm very interested in how you would see the story to continue, so please feel free to share some ideas.
@Awesomeshed: Hi, I really enjoyed this comic, I think you had a brilliant idea. (Unfortunately I think the person Who wrote this comment deleted their account), but I too wanted to ask if you want to continue this comic because there kinda is no ending and it's Really unfortunate.
Hi, thanks very much! To answer your question, I made this comic when I was in art school (about 5-6 years ago), and the idea behind it is that the characters living in the appartments and the one on the boat live in their own separate reality, which would have continued on forever if it wasn't for the reader who started watching everything they were doing. Once the appartment characters start realizing that they're being watched by the reader, they become distrustful of the intermediate character (the one on the boat), and decide to kill him. The ending is so abrupt because on the last page, the intermediate character is killed, therefore the bridge between the reader and the appartment characters is broken, and the reader has no way of seeing any more of it. I hope that makes sense, it was what I was trying to go for, but probably not very well implemented.
Thanks for the reply! It makes sense, it just was strange that the characters are phisically violent only in the very end while they talked a lot through all the story. Anyways, I didn't know you made it all these years ago, are you going to post more recent works? :)
I agree that the characters become unnecessarily violent at the end, it was a bit rushed. If I were to redo it, I would make it so that the character's feelings of insecurity grow more progressively. A few months ago I started working on a comic based on childhood fears and nightmares, but then suddenly got very involved in board game design, so I'm sort of doing that at the moment, but i will move back onto the comic once that phase is over.
Awesomeshed 7 months ago
Hey thanks very much! It's my first time posting here so that's really encouraging. I'm glad you felt that way reading it, That was exactly the vibe I was going for. I'm sorry to say this, but unfortunately that was the end, it's meant to be abrupt like that, maybe I didn't make that clear in the description.
Awesomeshed 7 months ago
I'm sorry I don't completely understand your question. I did the drawings as well as the story, if that was what you were asking.
Awesomeshed 7 months ago
Oh cool, I'm not sure if I'll ever continue it, but I'm very interested in how you would see the story to continue, so please feel free to share some ideas.
Awesomeshed 7 months ago
The end of your question didn't seem to load up.
PygmAleone 1 week ago
@Awesomeshed: Hi, I really enjoyed this comic, I think you had a brilliant idea. (Unfortunately I think the person Who wrote this comment deleted their account), but I too wanted to ask if you want to continue this comic because there kinda is no ending and it's Really unfortunate.
Awesomeshed 5 days ago
Hi, thanks very much! To answer your question, I made this comic when I was in art school (about 5-6 years ago), and the idea behind it is that the characters living in the appartments and the one on the boat live in their own separate reality, which would have continued on forever if it wasn't for the reader who started watching everything they were doing. Once the appartment characters start realizing that they're being watched by the reader, they become distrustful of the intermediate character (the one on the boat), and decide to kill him. The ending is so abrupt because on the last page, the intermediate character is killed, therefore the bridge between the reader and the appartment characters is broken, and the reader has no way of seeing any more of it. I hope that makes sense, it was what I was trying to go for, but probably not very well implemented.
PygmAleone 2 days ago
Thanks for the reply! It makes sense, it just was strange that the characters are phisically violent only in the very end while they talked a lot through all the story. Anyways, I didn't know you made it all these years ago, are you going to post more recent works? :)
Awesomeshed 8 hours ago
I agree that the characters become unnecessarily violent at the end, it was a bit rushed. If I were to redo it, I would make it so that the character's feelings of insecurity grow more progressively. A few months ago I started working on a comic based on childhood fears and nightmares, but then suddenly got very involved in board game design, so I'm sort of doing that at the moment, but i will move back onto the comic once that phase is over.