Wow! Full color! It was creative when Douglas got called, reminds me of Alvin & The Chipmunks 😂 I always love re-reading this, it’s evergreen fresh. Now only notice the different eye colors of Brandon! 😱 Also love that you can bring readers back here to remember Brandon, cause he re-appears in later chapter as Douglas’s future BFF 😊 You storywrite well =D
familikuchi 2 years ago
Wow! Full color! It was creative when Douglas got called, reminds me of Alvin & The Chipmunks 😂 I always love re-reading this, it’s evergreen fresh. Now only notice the different eye colors of Brandon! 😱 Also love that you can bring readers back here to remember Brandon, cause he re-appears in later chapter as Douglas’s future BFF 😊 You storywrite well =D