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Release #1 - Taliah - Chapter 1: Deep Red

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Taliah - Chapter 1: Deep Red
4.4K views • Dec 31, 2023
Leira Orta is on the run. She found an anomaly in a book of a star in the Celestial Constellation that appears and disappears every ten years. She showed her co-worker and now he's dead. She found out that the Blades of Oa, an assassin group, are after her to silence her, too. She has to get out of Procoline Kingdom but how? There has to be a way. Then she can worry about why people are dying to keep a star in the sky secret.
cflowers

cflowers 2 years ago

I am SO EXCITED to see where this goes!!!!!!!!! 🀩🀩🀩

KickingTranquilPage

Theythemmayhem 2 years ago

This is amazing, Squid. I can't wait to see more

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 2 years ago

Brand new page is now up!

Theillalchemist

Theillalchemist 1 year ago

woah, I can't believe I'm late to the party! this is so goddamn good!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

Brand new update is live!

JumpingBoldTiger

JumpingBoldTiger 1 year ago

Hurry up and make a physical copy.πŸ˜‰β€οΈ

plux

plux 1 year ago

Awesome read so far can’t wait for more!!

rchapman

rchapman 1 year ago (edited 1 year ago)

Well written, beautifully animated too. Can't wait for the rest.

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@cflowers: We are almost to the end of this first little book!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@Theythemmayhem: thank you so much! you have no idea what it means to me for you to say that ❀️

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@Theillalchemist: thank you homie! almost to the end of this first little part and then it gets ramped up in the next part! also, check the additional pages I added including the map and appendix!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@JumpingBoldTiger: I’m working as fast as my little fingers will allow! ❀️

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@plux: thank you so much homie! πŸ™πŸΏ the next part is gonna be off the rails!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 year ago

@rchapman: thank you sib! πŸ™πŸΏβ€οΈ I appreciate you

JumpingBoldTiger

JumpingBoldTiger 1 year ago

@ThePrizeWinningSquid, Bless your little fingers. ;-)

Musingandrealizing

Musingandrealizing 1 month ago

Wow, I love it! The characters are so cool!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 month ago

@JumpingBoldTiger: Thank you my friend! Chapter 3 is coming soon β€οΈπŸ–€πŸ¦‘

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 month ago

@Musingandrealizing: Aaahhhh thank you my friend! that means the world to me β€οΈπŸ–€πŸ¦‘

JCCOMIX

JCCOMIX 1 week ago

Exciting world and plot seems to be cool! Cartoonish style isn't really my cup of tea, but it's not a problem,I enjoy the story!

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 1 week ago

@JCCOMIX: thank you my friend! Hopefully my art style grows on you and you continue loving where the story is headed β€οΈπŸ–€πŸ¦‘ And if not I just appreciate you even taking a look at it to begin with

JCCOMIX

JCCOMIX 1 week ago

@ThePrizeWinningSquid: I believe it must be cool, you have interesting world and I feel the thing already!

Though, if I were, I would finish the chapter right after she escapes, and showing the misterious guy in his office! Leaving all the readers in the middle of the things,when the tension is maximum. Let them worry: did she escape? what happens next? who is this guy? I love, you know, kliffhanger thing.
right now for me everything that happens next is reducing tension and works like something from next chapter.

ThePrizeWinningSquid

ThePrizeWinningSquid 6 days ago

@JCCOMIX: Oh I can definitely see that. Hopefully with introducing a little more about Xavier and the connection to her father it makes you want to keep reading and anticipate just what he's going to do with Bourne for the next chapter! <3