The last panel hits with a quiet but heavy reveal
Ive never seen her face
Its funny how a single line can make the whole scene feel personal and distant at the same time
you think the distance between the cloak figure and the viewer and you wonder who she is really behind that mask what do you think her goal is really like is it justice or power or something personal
Also when you reply me please mention me so I can get an notification of your comment T^T
@Dracygirlyy1 Thank you so much! Omg made my eyes water a bit, love you appreciated the little detail! I’ll give you hint, the person narrating is featured on that last page twice ;)
oh that’s such a cool hint now I gotta look at that last page again lol
it hits even more knowing the narrator is actually in the scene too that’s really smart
did you plan that from the start or it just happened while writing?
also did you do both art and writing or are you working with a team like writer and artist separate?
@Dracygirlyy1 I wanted to introduce the Knight Commander from the perspective of those that fear and those that love her. The Knight Commander only says 3 words the entire time. The person narrating will be the main character of the Raven’s Guard series going forward, as they’re someone who looks up to O’mani.
@Dracygirlyy1 Thank you thank you! Right now I do absolutely everything by myself 😮💨 I’d love to have a full team, OAZIS is comics, movies, tv, video games, theme parks, the whole shabang! It’ll all come together in time! Having multiple teams would allow me to consistently put out multiple titles and keep their quality up. Right now I don’t wanna get bogged down by my CHRONIC PERFECTIONIST DISORDER lmao so I release these books as “demo versions” so I can get the story out there and then go back and enhance the art to completion!
Dracygirlyy1 2 weeks ago
The last panel hits with a quiet but heavy reveal
Ive never seen her face
Its funny how a single line can make the whole scene feel personal and distant at the same time
you think the distance between the cloak figure and the viewer and you wonder who she is really behind that mask what do you think her goal is really like is it justice or power or something personal
Also when you reply me please mention me so I can get an notification of your comment T^T
OazisComics 2 weeks ago
@Dracygirlyy1 Thank you so much! Omg made my eyes water a bit, love you appreciated the little detail! I’ll give you hint, the person narrating is featured on that last page twice ;)
Dracygirlyy1 2 weeks ago
@OazisComics:
oh that’s such a cool hint now I gotta look at that last page again lol
it hits even more knowing the narrator is actually in the scene too that’s really smart
did you plan that from the start or it just happened while writing?
also did you do both art and writing or are you working with a team like writer and artist separate?
OazisComics 2 weeks ago (edited 2 weeks ago)
@Dracygirlyy1 I wanted to introduce the Knight Commander from the perspective of those that fear and those that love her. The Knight Commander only says 3 words the entire time. The person narrating will be the main character of the Raven’s Guard series going forward, as they’re someone who looks up to O’mani.
Dracygirlyy1 2 weeks ago
@OazisComics:
Ayy that’s honestly such a sick concept 😭🔥
I love how you showed both fear and admiration for the Knight Commander, it adds so much depth.
And fr the fact that the narrator’s actually in the scene?? that’s genius 😭
Can’t wait to see more of the Raven’s Guard series fr. the setup already sounds so strong
And also have you thought about to hire an mangaka??? that would be awesome to see m
OazisComics 1 week ago (edited 1 week ago)
@Dracygirlyy1 Thank you thank you! Right now I do absolutely everything by myself 😮💨 I’d love to have a full team, OAZIS is comics, movies, tv, video games, theme parks, the whole shabang! It’ll all come together in time! Having multiple teams would allow me to consistently put out multiple titles and keep their quality up. Right now I don’t wanna get bogged down by my CHRONIC PERFECTIONIST DISORDER lmao so I release these books as “demo versions” so I can get the story out there and then go back and enhance the art to completion!