What if there is an afterlife?
And what if, instead of punishment, paradise, or reincarnation, you are forced to continue living in a society.
You wanted an afterlife? You wanted paradise or a well-deserved rest after death? What if you just... carried on?
Welcome to the SECOND PLANET. (How bad can it be... right?)
And finally - disclaimer time!: Do not use, reproduce, or distribute any content from my pages without my explicit permission. Unauthorized use, including for machine learning purposes, is strictly prohibited.
Why... Why are the bullets stored in the jukebox? 😂 and i am so intrigued what he wants from Lou!
i really like the angles in the beginning..even when no one moves because every one is held at gunpoint or pointing a gun, you're giving us so mch visual interest in changing the viewpoints. 💕
Ok, if his first thought is, that he's being held at ransom and this is a problem one could throw mney at... is he a rich boy? he totally gives off the vibes of a spoilt rich boy. and i really hope we can get rid of the gun soon. 😬
Always nice to have the tension broken by a well placed unexpected appearance. 😂 it really doesn't feel like 100 pages in the best of ways. It's so quick and i just want to binge it.
just finished rereading this, still soooo freaking good! i love how the story is developing so far, cant wait to figure out whats going on with Lou and this other guy
Ohh, would that mean that Hy was part of BS and betrayed them in some way??? Hy, what is your past? What is anyone’s past!?!
Also love the type of guy who does accept calls in the middle of a meeting just to tell you that they are in the middle of a meeting and don’t want to take calls. They and I would be the bestest of friends!
@Khetashey: These are the questions! Bwahahah... maybe he told her to call just when she's dying and got dissapointed in her after picking up the phone, naturally
Khetashey 2 months ago
Why... Why are the bullets stored in the jukebox? 😂 and i am so intrigued what he wants from Lou!
i really like the angles in the beginning..even when no one moves because every one is held at gunpoint or pointing a gun, you're giving us so mch visual interest in changing the viewpoints. 💕
Khetashey 1 month ago
Ok, if his first thought is, that he's being held at ransom and this is a problem one could throw mney at... is he a rich boy? he totally gives off the vibes of a spoilt rich boy. and i really hope we can get rid of the gun soon. 😬
AdyDoes 1 month ago
@Khetashey: Very true and very important! I'm proud of your deductions 😌
Khetashey 1 month ago
ohhh, finally some answers! though now I really want to know how trying to get her grades up/getting her diploma may lead to two kids dying. 😬
Khetashey 1 month ago
Always nice to have the tension broken by a well placed unexpected appearance. 😂 it really doesn't feel like 100 pages in the best of ways. It's so quick and i just want to binge it.
MaxinaJar 1 month ago
just finished rereading this, still soooo freaking good! i love how the story is developing so far, cant wait to figure out whats going on with Lou and this other guy
AdyDoes 3 weeks ago
@Khetashey: Thank you, Shey! I'm also very mad at myself with every reread, how slow I actually am
AdyDoes 3 weeks ago
@MaxinaJar: Thank you, Max! So happy you caught up! Hopefully we'll get our answers soon!
Khetashey 2 weeks ago
Ohh, would that mean that Hy was part of BS and betrayed them in some way??? Hy, what is your past? What is anyone’s past!?!
Also love the type of guy who does accept calls in the middle of a meeting just to tell you that they are in the middle of a meeting and don’t want to take calls. They and I would be the bestest of friends!
AdyDoes 3 days ago
@Khetashey: These are the questions! Bwahahah... maybe he told her to call just when she's dying and got dissapointed in her after picking up the phone, naturally