Release #2 - Notorious Seas. The Sea Dragon's Hunt
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2: Notorious Seas. The Sea Dragon's Hunt
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964 views • Aug 24, 2025
Jean plots to save his brother while James learns something interesting inside his jail cell. Drake makes his intents clear.
HittingBrightArtist 6 days ago (edited 6 days ago)
As a professional editor who has been editing comics for over a decade, I have to say I really enjoyed the story and the artwork in this book. It’s clear that a lot of effort and passion went into it, and that really shines through. That said, I did notice the lettering in this chapter felt weaker compared to the earlier ones. The downgrade was quite noticeable and at times it pulled me out of the flow of the story.
My friendly advice would be to consider working with an editor or bringing in a dedicated letterer who understands the rules of comic lettering. It would make the great work you’ve already done stand out even more. This will also save you a whole lot in the future, so you don’t end up wasting money on re-lettering if you’re ever pitching to a publisher.
jasontodd91 6 days ago
I appreciate your compliment and friendly advice. I will certainly keep this in mind, moving forward. Thank you.
SecuringHappyFork 3 days ago
@HittingBrightArtist: I won't really say the letters in this issue is a downgrade, it fits more into the rugged style of the comic, hand drawn just like the line art. the introduction of having links be behind certain materials too is something nice. overall it looked refreshing, you'll be taken aback at first then it becomes known to the eyes.