South Korea has fallen into darkness after the knocker killer appeared, the Fbi and the Nsa have sent over 50 of their best agents but now half of them have been murdered. Now a meeting is being held to figure out the case.
You go right into the story, a bit slower approach, less wordy at first, would help. You make your own art so I know it must take a lot to produce more pages to spread the story out at a less hectic pace!
Buildingofgrod 1 month ago
Great so far! keep it up!
Agentny003 1 month ago
Very impressive. Keep it up. 👍
AjtheWriter 1 month ago
@Agentny003: thxs
GlidinYeti 1 month ago
I like ryos design a lot, reminds me of my mc.
Honotrable 1 month ago
Cool
Docwyoming 1 month ago
You go right into the story, a bit slower approach, less wordy at first, would help. You make your own art so I know it must take a lot to produce more pages to spread the story out at a less hectic pace!
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Docwyoming 1 month ago
You are good, please just see that as an amateur's opinion.
JanneKarneus 3 weeks ago
It's quite cool so far! I'd say maybe to clean up the visual presentation of the words a bit more
But otherwise, nice work!
CastingEvasiveJester 1 week ago
Really enjoying this comic so far! The story's off to a great start, and the art and colors look amazing.
MikeDistantSamurai 1 week ago
@Honotrable: It’s super cute, isn’t it?
PaigeVision 1 week ago
Great work! Now, as all of us were thinking, smash or pass, Elizabeth?
Julkip 1 week ago
@PaigeVision: we? Ain't no we here.
Dark-Healer 1 week ago
@PaigeVision: pass
Mohsan 1 week ago
@PaigeVision: smash
LathunderGnome 1 week ago
I like your drawing style. I prefer this Chap to chapter 1.
Xiong 1 week ago
Good 👍
Xiong 1 week ago
@LathunderGnome: I feel that it was so rushed, the story
Duchessocthestars 1 week ago
@PaigeVision: really? stfu!
MasteringAdiral 6 days ago
@PaigeVision: smash!
Tiveeye 54 minutes ago
ok