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Read Erik! A Spider’s Everyday Life  5 Page 1 in English
5: Poetic Season
7 views • Aug 26, 2025
What is your favorite season?
FollowingRigorousDwarf

Dracygirlyy1 1 week ago

Yo this page was super chill  the autumn vibes are hitting hard with the leaves falling, mists drifting, and mushrooms popping up. it’s got that peaceful, cozy feeling that makes you just wanna soak it all in. the art really sells the season and atmosphere perfectly.


Your writing isn’t fitting well with the art. Do you have any ideas in terms of art? What do you say about your comic? Should we discuss it somewhere?

mbeecomics

mbeecomics 1 week ago

Thanks a lot for the feedback! 🙏 My idea with this strip was to keep the text simple and poetic, then break it with something silly at the end. English isn’t my first language, so sometimes my writing might sound a bit off. I’m happy to hear suggestions though – what would you imagine working better with the art?