PLAGUED BY VISIONS HE CAN'T EXPLAIN, DAMON TEETERS ON THE EDGE OF REALITY. MEANWHILE AN ANCIENT FORCE STIRS IN THE SHADOWS, LONG FORGOTTEN, OLD AS TIME ITSELF, A HERO OF OLD RISES TO A PATH UNKNOWN.
The parts I enjoyed mostly were the parts that sounded Nigerian... There weren't enough slang and 9ja dialect, even the dialogue needs to be fleshed out a bit. Add inner monologues because someone going through such stress shouldn't have a clear mind. But the art style is good
The art is good, really good. bu the story itself, the pacing and the lettering downplayed the art. "Chineke means God" come on... there is no solid time to digest the new characters being introduced. His mum putting on a large piece of Gold jewelry on a sunny afternoon in Lagos is somehow, the coffee was meant to be gotten from all this nescafe people... once again the artist did a good job.
pretty amazing comic, the art fascinating, love it ! ! ! but, you might want to work more on the narration, there parts where you should put in more narration, to show what the character is going through, but this is a masterpiece art ! can't wait for the next chapter ! ! !
AssemblingSupernaturalGladiator 2 months ago
Dopeeeee
ExploringKinglyLeprechaun 2 months ago
Nice ๐
PrincelyWanderer984 2 months ago
Chineke means God was my favorite thing ๐
Nice job
WUC 2 months ago
@PrincelyWanderer984: Thank you๐
WUC 2 months ago
@ExploringKinglyLeprechaun:
thanks
WUC 2 months ago
@AssemblingSupernaturalGladiator: I appreciate ๐๐พ
SmirkingPlacidGoblin 2 months ago
Interesting piece you got here
WUC 2 months ago
@SmirkingPlacidGoblin: thanks๐
GlowingHonorableHermit 2 months ago
The parts I enjoyed mostly were the parts that sounded Nigerian... There weren't enough slang and 9ja dialect, even the dialogue needs to be fleshed out a bit. Add inner monologues because someone going through such stress shouldn't have a clear mind. But the art style is good
WUC 2 months ago
@GlowingHonorableHermit: Thanks alot....I appreciate you for the feedback
ochibuike 2 months ago
Great start
SwimmingFrostyCentaur872 2 months ago
Interesting storyline
WUC 2 months ago
@ochibuike: thank you
WUC 2 months ago
@SwimmingFrostyCentaur872: Thanks
okabavon 2 months ago
Amazing stuffโค๏ธ
WUC 2 months ago
@okabavon: Thanks ๐๐พ
SecuringHappyFork 2 months ago
The art is good, really good. bu the story itself, the pacing and the lettering downplayed the art. "Chineke means God" come on... there is no solid time to digest the new characters being introduced. His mum putting on a large piece of Gold jewelry on a sunny afternoon in Lagos is somehow, the coffee was meant to be gotten from all this nescafe people... once again the artist did a good job.
WUC 2 months ago
@SecuringHappyFork: thank you for your honest review...I appreciate it
worldfuturestudio-wfs 4 weeks ago (edited 4 weeks ago)
pretty amazing comic, the art fascinating, love it ! ! ! but, you might want to work more on the narration, there parts where you should put in more narration, to show what the character is going through, but this is a masterpiece art ! can't wait for the next chapter ! ! !
WUC 4 weeks ago
@worldfuturestudio-wfs: I really appreciate this comment....i will learn from this...thanks alot๐๐พ๐๐พ