They called it heaven on earth — a land carved from nothing by generations of forgotten people. To Shah, a young boy born into its beauty, it was simply home. But paradise never stays untouched.
When political greed and foreign eyes fall upon the land, chaos unfolds. Soldiers march in. Terror knocks on every door. And for Shah, a single night shatters everything he ever knew — leaving behind only silence, fire, and the echo of love written in a letter.
Now alone in a war-torn world, Shah clings to fading memories and broken dreams. As the land burns around him, he must learn what “heaven” truly means — and whether it was ever the land at all.
“In the end, what was heaven? The land? The mountains?
No... it was the people.”
They called it heaven on earth — a land carved from nothing by generations of forgotten people. To Shah, a young boy born into its beauty, it was simply home. But paradise never stays untouched.
When political greed and foreign eyes fall upon the land, chaos unfolds. Soldiers march in. Terror knocks on every door. And for Shah, a single night shatters everything he ever knew — leaving behind only silence, fire, and the echo of love written in a letter.
Now alone in a war-torn world, Shah clings to fading memories and broken dreams. As the land burns around him, he must learn what “heaven” truly means — and whether it was ever the land at all.
“In the end, what was heaven? The land? The mountains?
No... It was..
Great one short,but too short,I liking and I want to support because I think this writer has potential maybe not but this story could be a piece of art,I know it's hard but hard choices we make.
Hey, I'm the artist behind 'The Heaven On Earth', just wanted to say it was a pleasure working on this story and I hope y'all enjoy! ...even if it makes you a little sad.
DiscerningWarmMonk 1 month ago
Great one short,but too short,I liking and I want to support because I think this writer has potential maybe not but this story could be a piece of art,I know it's hard but hard choices we make.
DIEgot 1 month ago
Hey, I'm the artist behind 'The Heaven On Earth', just wanted to say it was a pleasure working on this story and I hope y'all enjoy! ...even if it makes you a little sad.
ClimbingMurderousPen 1 month ago
@DIEgot: thanks 😁
DaCeroNine 1 month ago
Great work Diego! I loved the art and execution of the story! Looking forward to seeing more of your works!