Release #1 - Flesh Eating Cheerleaders from Outer Space - Issue 1

When a meteor crashes in the middle of campus, the students at Pullman University didn't realize that they were being invaded. These space creatures are able to inhabit and take over the human body. So, what happens when a group of cheerleaders are caught in the middle? They become these flesh-eating cannibals, of course.

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Flesh Eating Cheerleaders from Outer Space - Issue 1

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tripp 3 years ago

I love grindhouse and cheesecake for what it is but not at the cost of poor editing. Page 1: "Quell the herd"? Cull is the verb you're looking for. Page 23: "Our're"? I assume you mean "You're" based on context but a basic copy review would have caught these and more issues related to grammar and punctuation. This could have been a stupid fun read but basic issues like this ruin a story for me.

schween 2 years ago

@tripp: dude not everyone is as good at spelling as you.

tripp 2 years ago

An editor would have caught these and every spell check function in existence would have flagged these errors to the writer. It has nothing to do with spelling. This is just a case of someone being lazy.

Mark-45-xxx 2 years ago

I love it ! 😀👏👏👏👏👏

Mark-45-xxx 2 years ago

@tripp: dude nobody likes a grammar Nazi.

tripp 2 years ago

It's pretty weird to me that a creator like yourself doesn't see the value in criticism, particularly when we're talking about something as basic as proofreading and using spell check before a book is published - but hey, you do you. All the best to you!