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Release #4 - Chapter 3: Heatwave

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4: Chapter 3: Heatwave
292 views • Sep 13, 2022
With the Lyrae-3's cooling systems on the brink of total failure, Harv and his remaining crew struggle to keep their cool.
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Hi quality! Immersive view was great! Great flow. Art was great but colors were way too saturated for me take the comic seriously. Story so far doesn’t have enough emotional impact for adults. It’s fine for kids. Like Tin Tin with consistent angles of characters - few or no closeups. I hated the font and square balloons - looks newb to me. Anyway. I hope I can get my own panel view as good as yours! Good narrative tension, but I’m somebody dies in next chapter.